From “Flat and Forgettable” to “Holy Hell, I’m Hooked!”, the Big Picture Audit will help you tap into voice, plot, and pacing so your manuscript reads like an unputdownable masterpiece—something people read, feel, and can’t shut up about.

No more half-hearted pages or lukewarm drafts. Let’s crank up the magic. And let your works become the reason readers stay up all night.

Who Needs This?

(Spoiler: Probably You.)

If this sounds like you, raise your hand in the air:

🟥 You’re side-eyeing your book, muttering, “Is this even good?”

🟥 You can’t stomach the thought of dropping $$$$ on a full developmental edit that might leave you drowning in a 25-page critique letter.

🟥 You need someone to tell you what’s working, what’s not, and whether you should burn it or keep going.

🟥 You’ve spent countless nights Googling “How to fix my story” and waded through a bazillion blog posts, but still have zero clarity.

🟥 You’re desperate for someone with a savvy eye to help you cut the crap, hone the gold, and give you a clear direction forward—no sugarcoating required.

You finished your book.

High Fives All around.

Except now, you’re sitting there staring at it, wondering: Is this genius? Garbage? Something in between?

Do you revise? Bury it in your closet?
(Hint: the answer is not the closet.)

What you really need isn’t another vague self-editing guide. You need expert guidance.

Enter The Big Picture Edit—the no-fluff, high-impact service that bridges the gap between your vision and the book you’ve been dreaming about.

Just real, honest help to move you forward.

Here’s what you get

This isn’t some boring evergreen course. It’s not a group session where you’re just another face in the crowd. And it’s definitely not a pile of pre-recorded videos collecting dust in your inbox.

This is one-on-one, no-nonsense work with me—built specifically for your book.

I’m not here to skim, smile, and send you on your way. I dive deep into your story’s guts, figure out what’s working, what’s holding it back, and give you the tools to move forward with confidence.

🟥 A Full Read-Through of Your Manuscript
I don’t skim. I study. I’ll read every word, looking for what makes your story shine—and the ones that need fixing.

🟥A No-BS Evaluation Letter
This is the real talk your book needs. A sharp, 2-3 page letter that cuts through the fluff and gives you clear, actionable feedback. Forget the laundry lists of “meh.” This is all about what matters.

🟥 A One-Hour Call That Gets Real
Here’s where we dig in. We’ll unpack the feedback together, brainstorm solutions, and map out a revision plan that feels doable—not overwhelming. (No crawling under rocks required.)

This is the game-changer. The part that makes this offer feel too good to be true—except it’s 100% real.

** The Fine Print **

All pages must be in standard manuscript format: Word document, double-spaced, 12 pt. font, one-inch margins, Times New Roman.

This package does not include line editing, copy editing, or proofreading.

Let’s Talk Numbers.

If you’ve ever wished for a magic wand to instantly make everyone fall in love with your writing—this isn’t it. I can’t promise you spells, just expert feedback that transforms your book.

Here’s the deal:

Most pro-level developmental edits? They’ll average $8 a page. 

Let’s do the math: a 300-page book = $2,400

The Big Picture Edit? It’s $2.50 a page.
That’s a 360 page book for $750.00

Another reason this is a screaming deal?

Turn around time is 2 weeks.

Click the link below to book now.

Once these spots are gone, they’re gone.

If you don’t see a time available, it means there are no more left.

FAQS

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