Ready to hijack reader emotions so they feel all the feels?
Readers want to connect.
Let's make sure you're giving them emotions to connect with.
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Jocelyn gave me story advice that I will implement in my writing from here on out.Jocelyn gave me story advice that I will implement in my writing from here on out. She shared clever ways to reveal character details and a plan that could solve my main revision problem. She’s knowledgeable and kind, a killer combination in a book coach.
~ MEAGAN SMITH
Evoking emotions in your readers is the most powerful skill you can develop as a writer.
When readers feel, they connect.
You can’t make them feel something they don’t already feel.
But you can hijack emotions they already have.
When you sign up, I’ll take a hard look at your scene, identify what’s working, and give you simple tweaks to make sure readers are getting all the feels.
Jocelyn coached me on a manuscript revision and I can honestly say that her feedback was the best I've received.
Jocelyn coached me on a manuscript revision and I can honestly say that her feedback was the best I've received. She has a keen eye for details and a sixth sense about what will deepen a character and make them more emotionally impactful.
- MATTHEW JACKSON
This quick fix is for you if:
Someone’s told you, “Love the story, love the writing, can’t connect with the character.”
You’ve rewritten your entire novel to change the POV from the first person to third.
(Clue: If readers aren’t connecting, it doesn’t matter what POV you write in.)You are ready for actionable feedback to help you get the emotional response from readers that will keep them reading, raving, reviewing, and recommending your novel.
What do you need to do?
Sign up with your name and email address.
Submit your finished exercise #4 Strong Words from my presentation at the Women in Publishing Summit on hijacking reader emotions.
(No more than 250 words, please).Continue on with your normal life for 5-7 business days while I work my magic.
What will you get back?
A review with questions and suggestions to help you hijack reader emotions.
What does this cost?
Nothing. Nada. Zilch. Zippo. Zero.
