You’ve spent so long writing and re-writing your first page that your brain is short-circuiting and you can’t see what works and what doesn’t anymore. 

Readers want one thing, and only one thing, from you: a good story.

You've got one.

Let's make sure they know it from page one.

When you sign up, I’ll take a hard look at your first page, identify what’s working, and give you simple tweaks to make it drool-worthy.

This quick fix is for you if you:

• Wrote a first page (and re-wrote it no less than 893 times!)

• Want readers at 4 a.m. on a work night, who have to get up at 6 a.m, NEED to know what happens next!

• Are ready to get actionable feedback to help you write a first page that rocks your reader’s socks off.

What do you need to do? 

Send me the first page of your novel (no more than 250 words, please). Then continue on with your normal life for 3-5 business days while I work my magic. 

What will you get back? 

A one-page review with questions and suggestions to improve your first page. 

What does this cost?

Nothing. Nada. Zilch. Zippo. Zero.